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Ryz05

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"Integrated Field Communication System, which integrates voice and data services between PLA headquarters and air, ground/surface, underground, and underwater units. The system is likely to be based on radio communications, fibber-optic ('fibre-optic' or 'fiber-optic') cable and SATCOM"
 

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"The missile is believed to be more capable than most Western-designed SRAAM in current service, and has significantly improved the clsoe (spelled 'close') air combat capability of the PLA."

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"The improved JH-7A has a total of 11 external hardpoints for weapons, targeting pods,a nd ('and') drop tanks"

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Picture captions at bottom appear over-sized.

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Can you add dimming to the menu? Thank you.

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Can you explain why some lines are dimmed? Thank you.


Hi,

Thank you for the corrections. Please keep them coming.

I've amended the pages you mentioned above.

As to the JH-7 deployment, the serial numbers in light grey are the ones whose existence cannot be confirmed. According to the numbering system, the aircraft should be there but no photo of the aircraft with those numbers have been seen. Only those that have been confirmed in actual photos are in black.
 

Ryz05

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Hi,

Thank you for the corrections. Please keep them coming.

I've amended the pages you mentioned above.

As to the JH-7 deployment, the serial numbers in light grey are the ones whose existence cannot be confirmed. According to the numbering system, the aircraft should be there but no photo of the aircraft with those numbers have been seen. Only those that have been confirmed in actual photos are in black.

I thought maybe you can add a short explanation to the page about the dimmings. Then again, it should be self-explanatory. The website looks great. Thank you.
 
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"An improved Z-9G “nigh ('night') attack variant” entered PLA service in 2005."

"In 2005 the PLA introduced the new improved Z-9G “nigh ('night') attack variant”, which features an under-nose YY-1 observing and tracking unit developed by Luoyang Electro-Optics Technology Development Centre (EOTDC)."
 

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Shenfei SQF2040 under Light Combat Vehicles redirect to EQ2050. So I'm wondering if you meant to replace it with the EQ2050 title or have a different article on the SQF2040. Thank you.
 

Dongfeng

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Yeah, I was wondering whether I should have a separate SQF2040 page. However, they seem to have been rejected. So at the moment I am undecided
 

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The font is too small for "Ministry of National Defence." Can you make it normal size? Thank you.

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"The launcher is mounted on the improved North-Benz 2629 (directs to a broken link) 6X6 truck, which possesses better performance compared to the Yan’an SX2150 truck used by the Type 81."

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"The CMC is usually chaired by a(unneeded 'a') the Chinese President, who is supported by 2~3 vice Chairmen, including the Minister of National Defence."

Can you apply dimmings to menus in
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Dongfeng

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Hi, thank you for those corrections. I finally managed to get these done over the weekend.
 
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