Well, I try to be more careful about spelling than before. New pages are all written in MS Word first before being copy-pasted to the web design software. If you see any more errors, please let me know
Minor spelling corrections
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Well, I try to be more careful about spelling than before. New pages are all written in MS Word first before being copy-pasted to the web design software. If you see any more errors, please let me know
"Unfortunately the CZ-3B experienced experience (delete extra 'experience') an anomaly in attitude (should be 'altitude') (+of) about 2 seconds after launch at Xichang Satellite Launch Centre..."
"the CZ-3A has a greater geosynchronous transfer orbit capability, greater flexibility for attitude (should be 'altitude') control..."
"the CZ-3A has a greater geosynchronous transfer orbit capability, greater flexibility for attitude (should be 'altitude') control..."
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"The PLA Navy (PLAN) is operating both the 9M38 and the more advanced 9M317 missiles, with the former installed on the Russian-built Project 956 Sovremenny class missile destroyers and later (spelled 'latter') on the indigenous Type 052B Guangzhou class missile destroyers."
"There has been speculations that the YJ-8 may have been based on Exocet this (remove unneeded 'this') appears to be groundless."
"There has been speculations that the YJ-8 may have been based on Exocet this (remove unneeded 'this') appears to be groundless."
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Description says "5.8mm (yellow) and 9mm (brown)," but I see the 9mm as yellow and the 5.8mm as pink. There seems to be something wrong with the color, because 5.8 does not appear yellow and 9mm is not brown. Hope you can correct the confusion. Thanks!
thanks, the above errors have all been corrected.
As to the cartridge, the 9mm should be yellow and the 5.8mm is, well, brown and pink-ish (pink bullet?). I really cannot find a word to describe it.
"The launcher can be attached to the rifle barrel without requiring (remove 'requiring') dissembling (should be 'disassembling') the rifle itself."
"The QLT89 (also known as Type 89 in PLA designation) is a compact, 50mm “mini motor (should be 'mortar')” equipped by the PLA."
For the cartridge picture, you can say the 9mm has a blunt tip and appears yellow in the picture, while the 5.8mm has a pointy tip and appears brown. The coloration of the two are more or less the same if you look at (9mm) and (5.8mm).
"The QLT89 (also known as Type 89 in PLA designation) is a compact, 50mm “mini motor (should be 'mortar')” equipped by the PLA."
For the cartridge picture, you can say the 9mm has a blunt tip and appears yellow in the picture, while the 5.8mm has a pointy tip and appears brown. The coloration of the two are more or less the same if you look at (9mm) and (5.8mm).
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"The missile is believed to be more capable than most Western-designed SRAAM in current service, and has significantly improved the clsoe (spelled 'close') air combat capability of the PLA."
"The improved JH-7A has a total of 11 external hardpoints for weapons, targeting pods,a nd ('and') drop tanks"
Picture captions at bottom appear over-sized.
Can you add dimming to the menu? Thank you.
Can you explain why some lines are dimmed? Thank you.
"The improved JH-7A has a total of 11 external hardpoints for weapons, targeting pods,a nd ('and') drop tanks"
Picture captions at bottom appear over-sized.
Can you add dimming to the menu? Thank you.
Can you explain why some lines are dimmed? Thank you.
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